What i see
I see a man sitting on a broken tree, he has a green T-shirt, blue pants and black gumboots. The gorilla is small and chubby, it has black fur and long arms.
My story,
Gently, the man sat down on the broken tree covering the passage way. Looking up he noticed the cold winter wind had brought with it some dark unpleasant clouds so sombre, it was like a big brick wall was covering the sun. It wasn't gonna rain according to the weather forecast, but he believed it was gonna rain anyway. He knows nothing of the world other than the jungle, that's why he was so lonely. Desperate to have at least one friend he started talking to himself. He sat there talking to himself and then he heard some leaves rustings, out came a gorilla. When they had an eye connection he felt something he had never felt before. It was as if the gorilla and him were meant for each other, the gorilla sat next to him and they both just looked down at the floor.
Kia Ora Bloggers Felix here, I like your writing because its very descriptive and interesting. I wonder how long it took? Hope you write more amazing stories! Blog Ya Later
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Felix! Thanks for enjoying my story! The lonely man took 2 blocks to finish. I hope i can come up with more descriptive stories!
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-Manogi
Kia Ora Lucy here, I like how you described your story. It has lots of detail. Keep up that god work!
ReplyDeleteHow long did it take you to write this story?
Blog you later!
Lucy
Kia Ora Lucy! Thanks you for liking my story and commenting on it. This descriptive story took me around 2 blocks to finish. How long does it take you to finish a descriptive story?
DeleteBlog you later Lucy!
-Manogi